2019考研翻译硕士：MTI汉译英政治类话题的表达积累(2)

　　7. 针对长期存在的重审批、轻监管、弱服务问题，我们持续深化“放管服”改革，加快转变政府职能，减少微观管理、直接干预，注重加强宏观调控、市场监管和公共服务。

　　“重审批、轻监管、弱服务”翻译为“emphasis on approval procedures, insufficient attention to regulatory processes, and a failure to provide strong services”这种并列的成分要注意成分相同，不要说汉语意思对了，一个用了动词短语，一个用名词短语出现语法混乱。“放管服”就是简政放权、放管结合、优化服务streamline administration, delegate powers, improve regulation, and strengthen services。转变政府职能transform government functions，宏观调控macro regulation，市场监管market regulation。

　　To address the longstanding issues of excessive emphasis on approval procedures, insufficient attention to regulatory processes, and a failure to provide strong services, we have been consistently deepening reforms to streamline administration, delegate powers, improve regulation, and strengthen services. We have sped up efforts to transform government functions, reduced micromanagement and direct intervention, and done more to improve macro regulation, market regulation, and public services.

　　8. 创新和加强事中事后监管，实行“双随机、一公开”，随机抽取检查人员和检查对象、及时公开查处结果，提高了监管效能和公正性。

　　“双随机、一公开”即在监管过程中随机抽取检查对象，随机选派执法检查人员，抽查情况及查处结果及时向社会公开。oversight through inspections by randomly selected inspectors of randomly selected entities and the public release of inspection results。后提高了监管效能和公正性说的是采取“双随机、一公开”这一措施后取得的成果。所以开篇说these efforts have made，后面注意不要中式英语翻译为improve the effectiveness and impartiality of regulation.

　　We have developed new and better ways of conducting compliance oversight, and introduced a new model of oversight combining randomly selected inspectors who inspect randomly selected entities and the prompt release of results. These efforts have made regulation more effective and impartial.

　　9. 推行“互联网+政务服务”，实施一 站式服务等举措。营商环境持续改善，市场活力明显增强，群众办事更加便利。

　　这句话里有几个表达需要大家积累下来：推行roll out, 一 站式服务one-stop service model，市场活力明显增强the market is more energized，群众办事更加便利people can access government services more easily

　　We have rolled out the Internet Plus Government Services model and adopted measures such as the one-stop service model. Thanks to the above reforms, the business environment has consistently improved, the market is more energized, and people can access government services more easily.