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哆啦a梦讲解英语作文90字？

I most like the cartoon character is Doraemon, he is a machine cat, is a Japanesecartoon characters. I knew him before, this summer vacation, I saw a movie aboutDoraemon movie - "Nobita's dinosaur", he made a deep impression on me..

Doraemon grow very cute, round head, big mouth, fat body, short legs, a Hantaikeju appearance. His neck hung a small golden bell, very characteristic.

Doraemon has a name, called the little bells. He loves Dorayaki, every time with big male rob to eat

我和哆啦a梦过一天作文评语？

1.这篇作文发挥了你丰富的想象力，而且，你叫我和哆啦A梦过一天，写的是既然如此那，的真实，写出了你内心真实的想法，而且，运用了你的心理变化，巧妙地将文章的语言运用的更的合适！

2.开头时略过于粗糙，而且，你没有将多啦a梦展现出它神奇的力量，涵盖你对童话世界全部的向往，虽然你如同白话文一样的叙述了，但是，我期望你下次写作文更的精致一点！

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