2021年6月英语六级优秀作文赏析
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【篇一】2021年6月英语六级优秀作文赏析
There are many ways of traveling. People may t ravel by plane if they want to t ravel far andreach their destination in a shorter time. I t is the most comfor table but expensive way. Mostpeople travel by train because it is a less expensive way but the compar tments are crampedand stuffy. Bus journey is a cheaper way but it is spent on narrow, bumpy roads which arecrowded with traffic. Trips by ship may be the cheapest and most comfortable way but it takestoo much time.
I like traveling by bike. I can set out when I like and stop when I like. I can go wherever I likeso that I can enjoy delightful spots rarely visited by other travelers. When I feel tired, I sitdown by the bike and have a good rest. Besides, I can save much money for tickets and muchtime in waiting for thet rain or bus. I can cover more places by riding a bike than going on foot.
Traveling by bike is good to health. It is really a sort of good exercise to st rengthen one'smuscles and to test one's will. Moreover, it brings no pollution to the air. So it helps to cleanthe atmosphere.
CET6六级作文构造分析：
·游览的方法有多种
* Plane
* Train
* Bu s
* Ship
·我爱骑车出游
* Convenient
* Accessible to any place
* Save money and time
·骑车出游无益健康
* St rengthen one's will
* Test one's will
* No pollution
CET6六级作文内容分析：
本文是一篇简单的谈论文, 文中首先枚举了多种交通工具并证明优弱点, 而后落实到作者考生自己的喜欢———骑车出游, 接着说出喜欢的来由。后一段为总结。本文篇幅不长, 但级别清晰, 又很连接, 每段的第一句均为主题句, 段满意思统一, 不跑题。本文应是一篇四级作文。
CET6六级作文全能句型：
destination n. 目的地
compartment n. 车箱
cramped and stuffy 拥堵
narrow, bumpy roads 狭隘而颠簸的路面
set out 动身
strengthen one's muscle and test one's will 加强体格磨炼意志
【篇二】2021年6月英语六级优秀作文赏析
Everywhere you go, you'll see people, male or female, old or young, wearing jeans. Indeed, jeans have grown more and more popular since the first pair was born. In newspapers andmagazines or on TV you often come across such ads as "Buy these jeans they are cheap. Buythem — they are hardwea ring. Buy them — they are comfortable." I think there is no cheatingin these ads.
In the first place, jeans are so cheap that almost everyone can afford to buy a pair, especiallyfor students and wage-earners. No one would not pay less and get more.
That jeans wear well and wash well is their second superiority to other kinds of trousers. Wherever you go and whatever you do, you'll find jeans your good companion. Made of purecotton, jeans are very comfortable. What is more, they produce a good image and make youlook casual, sporty, tough, elegant, and sophisticated.
Modern fashions come and go quickly, but, thanks to Levi Strauss, jeans alwaysr emain people'sfirst choice.
CET6六级作文内容分析：
本文是一篇证明文, 是一篇三段式作文。第一段证明牛崽裤盛行的局面, 并以三句告白词说出盛行的缘故原由, 即三大特色———价廉、耐穿和恬静。第二段中有三小段, 分述上述三大特色, 并加之谈论。在后一小段中自然地增补了牛崽裤其他特色, 使叙述内容越发富厚。末端段只要一句, 但精练且总结性强。
CET6六级作文全能句型：
see...+ ing 看到……做某事
There is no cheating in these ads. 这些告白并无诱骗。
wage-earner n. 工薪阶级
No one would not pay less and get more. 人人都愿要价廉物美。( 本句顶用了两重否认的表达)
wear well and wash well 耐穿耐洗
produce a good image 发生一好的抽象
sporty a. 如活动员
tough a. 坚固
【篇三】2021年6月英语六级优秀作文赏析
"Playing a Game Is Fun Only When You Win." Do You Agree or Disagree with ThisStatement?
Some people argue that athletes, while playing games, should adhere to the principle "Friendship first, competition second," and that is the true sportsman ship.
Personally, I disagree with this point of view. There is no denying that competitors should befriendly with each other. However, the primary concern of every player, after hard training fora year or two, is to win the game. His/ Her sole motivation, either during the training or in therace, is prompted by a looming hope and a prospective championship. Be it a chess game or acompetition of weight-lifting or a race of a hundred-metre dash, the case is always true. If he/ she wins the game, high rewards, flowers and honour will pile upon him/ her. If he/ she losesonce or twice, he/ she will become less courageous for the third time. However, several lossesmay beat him/ her down, and his/ her next battle, if he/she is daring to fight, will probably bea fiasco.
So, in my mind, the fun or happiness of playing a game lies in the athlete's ultimateachievement of the goal. We all know Napoleon's famous saying that a soldier who does nothave the ambition to become a marshal is not a real soldier. I agree that an unambitiousathlete is not a real athlete.
CET6六级作文构造分析：
·some people's a rgue — "Friendship first, competition second" = true sportsmanship
·My argue
* Primary concern of every player — to win the game
* Motivated by championship
* Several losses — fiasco
·Conclusion
* Fun or happiness in ultimate achievement
* Unambitious athlete — not a real athlete
CET6六级作文内容分析：
本文是一篇谈论文, 作者的论点冲破了“ 交情第一, 角逐第二”的通例原则, 而以为角逐便是要赢, 文中充溢了合作认识, 但说感性很强, 很难让人不服气。在末端段中借用了拿破仑的名言“ 不想当元帅的兵士不是一个真实的兵士”, 并依此证明“没有大志的活动员就不是一个真实的活动员”。此文很值得六级和托福应试者考试复习。
CET6六级作文全能句型：
adhere to = follow
sportsmanship n. 活动员精神
There is no denying that... 不行承认
be f riendly with 与……敌对
prima ry concern 重要关怀的事
be prompted by a looming hope and a prospective championship 遭到一种模糊的但愿和将来冠军的鼓励
Be it a chess game... =Whether it be a ches s game... 这是一退让状语从句，句中谓语为假造语气
weight-lif ting 举重
a hundered-metre dash 百米竞走
become less cour ageous 锐气顿减
fiasco n. 惨败
Napoleon's famous saying that a soldier who does not have the ambition to become a marshalis not a real soldier拿破仑的名言“不想当元帅的兵士不是一个真实的兵士”
unambitious a. 无大志的