用一般过去时写一篇游记的作文,写游记作文可以写去游泳吗英语

用大多数情况下过去时,写一篇游记的作文?
It was sunny today,so I went out travelling with my friends.I visited some places such as bookshop,park,zoo and so on.after I had breakfast,I started to leave home.first,I went to the bookshop to read books,after two hours,I went out of the bookshop and bought some interesting books.then I went to the park and the scenery was very beautiful.after lunch,I went to the zoo,the monkeys in the zoo were lovely.
写游记作文可以写去游泳吗?
写游记作文可以有不少内容例如说我和爸爸去参观某一个地方去登山去。去游泳等等都可以。